homework

2012-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1. (Can) you speak any foreign languages? a. May b. Can c. Have 2. Liz (should) get tired of her job. It is so boring. a. has to b. must c. should 3. Where's Nick? He (might) be in his office. a. might b. mustn't c. is to 4. Take an umbrella. It (might) rain later. a. has to b. need c. might 5. Jack (had to) go to hospital yesterday. a. must b. had to c. need I have no sprit. I don't even know that it's friday. I'm understood our conversation at now. Have a wonderful weekend, Lala :) I'm writting a letter which I will send my girlfriend. The thing is the letter is being composed English. So I need your help. Dear my girlfriend. Hello, baby~ Especially, the last letter is being written by English. You are facing of hardship because if you translate this...um..;^) I belive that you can English well when you read it. No, you have to do. Anyway, It's long time to kill and difficult that write on English letter. To be continue.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim That is really so sweet of you to write a letter in English. Sooooo ROMANTIC!! Just continue exerting effort in writing something in English Kim that\'s definitely a good practice. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1. (Can) you speak any foreign languages? 
a. May 
b. Can 
c. Have 
>> Correct
2. Liz (should) get tired of her job. It is so boring. 
a. has to 
b. must 
c. should
>> B. must
3. Where\'s Nick? He (might) be in his office. 
a. might 
b. mustn\'t 
c. is to
>> Correct
4. Take an umbrella. It (might) rain later. 
a. has to 
b. need 
c. might
>> Correct
5. Jack (had to) go to hospital yesterday. 
a. must 
b. had to 
c. need
>> Correct
I have no sprit.
>> I have low spirit today.
I don\'t even know that it\'s friday.
>> Correct
I\'m understood our conversation at now.
>> I understood our conversation today.
Have a wonderful weekend, Lala :)
>> Correct (It\'s Lara, Kim)
I\'m writting a letter which I will send my girlfriend.
>> I wrote a letter that I will send to my girlfriend.
The thing is the letter is being composed English.
>> The thing is the letter is being composed in English.
So I need your help.
>> Correct
Dear my girlfriend.
>> Correct
Hello, baby~ Especially, the last letter is being written by English.
>> Hello baby. This letter is special because it\'s being written in English.
You are facing of hardship because if you translate this...um..;^)
>> You\'ll be facing a hard time translating this.. um.
I belive that you can English well when you read it. No, you have to do.
>> I believe that you\'re already fluent in English.
Anyway, It\'s long time to kill and difficult that write on English letter.
>> Anyway, this is really killing my time and I\'m having difficulty writing an English letter.
To be continue.
>> To be continued.



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