homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1) If I (study), I (will pass) the exams.
2) If the sun (shines), we (will walk) to the town.
3) If he (has) a temperature, he (will see) the doctor.
4) If my friends (come), I (will be) very happy.
5) If she (earns) a lot of money, she (will fly) to New York.
6) If we (travel) to London, we (will visit) the museums.
7) If you (wear) sandals in the mountains, you (will slip) on the rocks.
8) If Rita (forgets) her homework, the teacher (will give) her a low mark.
9) If they (go) to the disco, they (will listen) to loud music.
10) If you (wait) a minute, I (will ask) my parents.
I'm very upset.
This Olympic is the worst.
Don't you think that referee is always impartial?
I'm sick and tired damn the unfair judgements.
I really hate injustice and decomposition.
Who got much money and power is a boss.
His words and deeds are just the law.
Maybe I'm not asleep well.
I'm really sad.
Anyway, See you tomorrow.
Good day mate!
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim Good job on your composition. I noticed that your writing is a bit improving nowadays. Just keep it up. Don\'t be sad anymore. Let\'s just hope that Korea will gain more medals in the following days. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1) If I (study), I (will pass) the exams.
>> Correct2) If the sun (shines), we (will walk) to the town.
>> Correct3) If he (has) a temperature, he (will see) the doctor.
>> Correct4) If my friends (come), I (will be) very happy.
>> Correct5) If she (earns) a lot of money, she (will fly) to New York.
>> Correct6) If we (travel) to London, we (will visit) the museums.
>> Correct7) If you (wear) sandals in the mountains, you (will slip) on the rocks.
>> Correct8) If Rita (forgets) her homework, the teacher (will give) her a low mark.
>> Correct9) If they (go) to the disco, they (will listen) to loud music.
>> Correct10) If you (wait) a minute, I (will ask) my parents.>> CorrectI\'m very upset.
>> CorrectThis Olympic is the worst.
>> This year\'s Olympic game is the worst.Don\'t you think that referee is always impartial?
>> CorrectI\'m sick and tired damn the unfair judgements.
>> I\'m sick and damn tired with their unfair decision.I really hate injustice and decomposition.
>> CorrectWho got much money and power is a boss.
>> The one who got much money and power is a boss.His words and deeds are just the law.
>> CorrectMaybe I\'m not asleep well.
>> Maybe I haven\'t slept well.I\'m really sad.
>> CorrectAnyway, See you tomorrow.
>> Anyway, see you tomorrow.Good day mate!
>> Correct
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