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2012-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Jane Good to see you again on Internet I am try to do my homework now!!! however, sorry for late. Please try to understand me :( I am suddenly reminded that we have only three days left. I would like to talk with you more than 3 months. However, I should study other things for the exam. I checked out how often and long time I can study a day in week. I have only 6hours for studying.. So that's why .. anyway, we have 3 days more!!!! I will do my best (as I always say, but always make disappointment!!!) See you soon HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Match the two parts to make a common phrase used for presentations 1. audio-visual - equipment 2. confident - attitude 3. eye -contactct 4. maximum - volume 5. visual- aid

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I was very happy to see your composition because finally, you devoted some time for your homework. However, I feel so sad that we only have three days left. I wish to talk with you longer but I understand that you have to prepare for your exam. I wish you all the best things you deserve. I hope that you can finally settle your priorities in life so that you can manage your time well. You can do it! take care and have a great time! T. JanE ^^ Hi, Jane >> Correct Good to see you again on Internet>> Good to see you again on the Internet.I am try to do my homework now!!! >> I tried doing my homework.however, sorry for late. >> However, sorry for submitting it late.Please try to understand me :(>> Correct I am suddenly reminded that we have only three days left. >> Correct I would like to talk with you more than 3 months. >> I would like to talk with you for more than 3 months.However, I should study other things for the exam.>> Correct I checked out how often and long time I can study a day in week. >> I checked out how often and how long I can study on a daily and weekly basis.I have only 6hours for studying..>> Correct So that\'s why .. >> Correct anyway, we have 3 days more!!!! >> Correct I will do my best (as I always say, but always make disappointment!!!)>> Correct See you soon>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Match the two parts to make a common phrase used for presentations1. audio-visual - equipment>> Correct 2. confident - attitude>> Correct 3. eye -contactct>> Correct 4. maximum - volume>> Correct 5. visual- aid >> Correct

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