Homework

2012-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Have you 1.ever wanted to learn a new language? My friend Tom has 2.also wanted to learn Russian. 3.Unfortunately, he 4.never had the time until last year. He had 5.just finished his studies at university and decided that he should 6.quickly begin. He 7.always wanted to do something 8.completely different. He knew he wouldn't be able to speak 9. fluently. However, he thought that if he worked 10.carefully, he would 11.certainly be able to at least converse in Russian. He worked very 12. hard and only 13.occasionally missed a class. He 14.often rented films in Russian to watch, and was surprised at how 15.definitely he began to understand the basic meaning of the conversations. 16.Eventually, he could even listen to pop songs in Russian and understand the texts. He hasn't been to Russia 17.yet, but he will 18.probably go soon

강사 첨삭

Mr. [이름]! That was actually a challenge for you and you did GREAT! You almost perfect your homework. Aren't you proud of yourself? Well, you must be! Just enjoy the rest of your day Sir. Have fun and enjoy! Oh, I forgot, maybe you are still working at the moment. I will talk to you again tomorrow Sir. -Teacher Chloe Have you 1.ever wanted to learn a new language? My friend Tom has 2.also wanted to learn Russian. 3.Unfortunately, he 4.never had the time until last year. He had 5.just finished his studies at university and decided that he should 6.quickly begin. He 7.always wanted to do something 8.completely different. He knew he wouldn\'t be able to speak 9. fluently. However, he thought that if he worked 10.carefully, he would 11.certainly be able to at least converse in Russian. He worked very 12. hard and only 13.occasionally missed a class. He 14.often rented films in Russian to watch, and was surprised at how 15.definitely he began to understand the basic meaning of the conversations. 16.Eventually, he could even listen to pop songs in Russian and understand the texts. He hasn\'t been to Russia 17.yet, but he will 18.probably go soon >>Have you 1.ever wanted to learn a new language? My friend Tom has 2.always wanted to learn Russian. 3.unfortunately, he 4. never had the time until last year. He had 5.just finished his studies at university and decided that he should 6.probably begin. He 7.also wanted to do something 8. completely different. He knew he wouldn\'t be able to speak 9. fluently. However, he thought that if he worked 10. carefully/hard, he would 11.definitely/certainlybe able to at least converse in Russian. He worked very 12.hard/carefullyand only 13. occasionally missed a class. He 14. Often rented films in Russian to watch, and was surprised at how 15.quickly he began to understand the basic meaning of the conversations. 16.eventually, he could even listen to pop songs in Russian and understand the texts. He hasn\'t been to Russia 17.yet, but he will 18.certainly/definitelygo soon.  

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