homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. London (has changed) a lot since 1975.
2. I did my homework when I (had watched) television.
3. If she asks for money, I (will give) her.
4. The manager (will arrive, is arriving) soon.
5. She never (comes) late to school.
6. I met Jane while I (was walking) on the beach.
7. If I (knew) the address, I would have gone there.
8. She (went) to London yesterday.
9. Scientists (have just discovered) a new planet.
10. The baby (is) usually well behaved.
connected
I surely wrote this letter in English to the end.
I want you to remember it more specially
I believe that you're already fluent in English for reading it without any obstacles.
At last, I'm going to Australia soon.
I know, You much concerned about that.
Actually, I also have half throb and another worry.
But trust me.
I can do well as you.
I love only you when I will be there.
The ring is voucher that I always wearing my fourth finger.
So we living each other place but we are together.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim Well, this is another sweet words from you to your girlfriend. You\'re girlfriend is sooo lucky to have you. So always cherish each other and stay in love. I revised some of the words so it could be more romantic and your girlfriend will like it even more. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Tecaher Lara
Here are my corrcetions for you:
1. London (has changed) a lot since 1975.>> Correct2. I did my homework when I (had watched) television.>> I did my homework when I was watching television.3. If she asks for money, I (will give) her.>> Correct4. The manager (will arrive, is arriving) soon.>> The manager will arrive soon.5. She never (comes) late to school.>> Correct6. I met Jane while I (was walking) on the beach.>> Correct7. If I (knew) the address, I would have gone there.>> If I had known the address, I would have gone there.8. She (went) to London yesterday.>> Correct9. Scientists (have just discovered) a new planet.>> Correct10. The baby (is) usually well behaved.>> Correctconnected>> The continuation of my letter.I surely wrote this letter in English to the end.
>> CorrectI want you to remember it more specially
>> I want you to remember this in a most special way.I believe that you\'re already fluent in English for reading it without any obstacles.
>> I believe that you\'re already fluent in English without any obstacles especially in reading.At last, I\'m going to Australia soon.
>> CorrectI know, You much concerned about that.
>> I know you\'re much concerned about that.Actually, I also have half throb and another worry.
>> Actually, I\'m somehow troubled and feeling worry about the matter.But trust me.
>> CorrectI can do well as you.
>> I can do well as you do.I love only you when I will be there.
>> It\'s only you that I will love even if I\'m there.The ring is voucher that I always wearing my fourth finger.
>> The ring is our promise of love that I\'ll always be wearing in my finger.So we living each other place but we are together.
>> Though we are distance apart but we are together by heart.
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