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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello hello there again Sang Hwa! KKKKK ~__~
That\'s right! A simple air conditioning system would be nice, except for the fact that it costs money to use one T__T. Anyway, the weather in Korea is hot but it is definitely the opposite in my country T.T
Thank you for your complement ^.^ I feel very very happy to hear that. You know what, you shouldn\'t be too hard on yourself. You are a very good student. Trust me. I already taught a lot of Korean students, and compared to others you are definitely not bad at all. The fact that you can already tackle a TOEFL course means that you have good comprehension. You will always make mistakes, like me. I always say this to my students, \"Don\'t let your mistakes stop you from speaking\" ^^ It is with correct practice and patience that you will improve ^^. Another thing is to enjoy learning because if you force yourself to learn, you will improve slowly. Remember, even the experts started off as beginners, too! You are on your way towards become a very good English speaker ^__^
--t.Karen (.-__-)
Hi Karen.
>> Correct! ^^
Always thanks for teaching me with patience!
>> Thanks for always teaching me with patience!
>> ** Usually adverbs would come first, followed by the word it modifies. In your sentence, the adverb is \"Always\" and it modifies the verb \"Teaching\".
Whenever I hear the record of phone call, I feel that My speaking skill in English is still such an idiot.
>> Whenever I listen to the recording of the phone call, I feel that my English speaking skill is still like an idiot\'s.
>> ** Use the word \"Listen\" because when you \"Listen\", it is with intention, but when you \"Hear\" it is by accident.
>> ** A \"Recording\" is a copy of a conversation.
>> ** There is no no need to capitalize the first letter of the word \"My\" because it is not a proper noun.
But It will be better with hard practicing..and with your great help.
>> But it will be better with hard practice and with your great help.
>> ** There is no no need to capitalize the first letter of the word \"It\" because it is not a proper noun.
>> ** Use the word \"Practice\" instead because it is modified by an adjective.
>> ** Don\'t use a period [ . ] in the middle of your sentence.
You\'re so great teacher and very nice because you always try to give students good confidence by prasing and correcting their english skills.
>> You\'re such a great teacher and you are very nice because you always to try to give students good confidence by praising and correcting their English skills.
>> ** Be careful with your spelling: \"Praising\".
>> Capitalize the first letter of the word \"English\" because it is a proper noun.
Anyway, I think the best way to beat the summer heat is an air conditioner if I\'m rockefeller that could afford to pay expensive electricity bill.
>> Anyway, I think the best way to beat the summer heat is an air conditioner. If I\'m a rockefeller, I could afford to pay an expensive electricity bill.
>> ** It would be easier to understand if you separate your sentences.
But I\'m not, so instead of air conditioner I would use an electric fan.
>> Correct! ^^
Not enough to beat this hot weather but at least I don\'t have to be sweaty.
Have a nice day and see you tomorrow!^^
>> Correct! ^^
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