Homework 17
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. How has COVID-19 changed student\'s lives for the better? for the worse?
A. I come up with the impact on student\'s lives for the worse. Due to COVID-19, students have not been able to make a friendship not only in school but also playground. One semester has already passed, which was the worst for the newly enrolled students who don\'t even know who are the same period with them. I think the most important thing for students is not study but socialization. Taking classes by video call doesn\'t make up for not going to school.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Well, I think everything has it\'s own advantages and disadvantages. For now, I can\'t really tell if it has a greater disadvantage on students. But I definitely agree with some reasons you have stated here. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I come up with the impact on student\'s lives for the worse.
>>CORRECT
Due to
COVID-19, students have not been able to make a friendship not only in
school but also playground.
>>Due to COVID19, students can\'t socialize and make friends not only in school but outside as well.
One semester has already passed, which was
the worst for the newly enrolled students who don\'t even know who are
the same period with them.
>>One semester has already finished, which is the worst for newly enrolled students since they didn\'t even know the students in the same period with them.
I think the most important thing for students
is not study but socialization.
>>I think the most important thing for students
is not studying but socializing.
Taking classes by video call doesn\'t
make up for not going to school.
>>CORRECT
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