Homework 17

ESSAY: Is it right to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing? What do you think? It has to be stopped to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing. People can make other fabrics enough with some threads. Sacrificing animals to have clothing is just a greed in people's mind, because it is not directly related to our survive but just related to decoration. However, there are so many items which made by animal that people can not have choice but to buy these items. I think nations have to establish some rules to protect animals and manufacturers also have to observe rules.

Hi there [이름]!^^ If people have ideas like you I think that it would make a really great difference. A lot of people nowadays are very dependent on products that had used animals or tested on animals. If there is nothing to stop it there should be a control. Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: It has to be stopped to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing . >> Sacrificing some animals for our clothing must be stopped.  People can make other fabrics enough with some threads. >> CORRECT OR> People can use threads for fabrics.Sacrificing animals to have clothing is just a greed in people\'s mind, because it is not directly related to our survive but just related to decoration. >> Sacrificing animals to have clothing is just greed in people\'s minds, because it is not directly related to our survival but just related to decorations. However, there are so many items which made by animal that people can not have choice but to buy these items. >> However, there are so many items which are made by animals that people can not have  a choice but to buy.  I think nations have to establish some rules to protect animals and manufacturers also have to observe rules. >> CORRECT OR> Countries must has strict rules and also the manufacturers must follow it.