homework 17

2016-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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When was the happiest time of your childhood? I love to playing soccer. Until i was a 13 years old, we always played soccer with class friends after school. It equal to eat meal to me. Sometimes i absented English academy to play with them. In winter, we also played on the slippery ground. it is attracted us about own condition. But strangely, we didn't do that at rainy days depending on my rememberance. Anyway, we could be felt exciting as won a victory against the other class in my school.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun! Thank you once again for the time and effort in doing your homework... You did very good and I commend you for a job well done!I will call you again tomorrow my dear. Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ When was the happiest time of your childhood?I love to playing soccer. >>I love to play soccer. Until i was a 13 years old, we always played soccer with class friends after school.>>Until I was 13 years old, we played soccer after school.It equal to eat meal to me. >>I would raher play soccer than eat my meal. Sometimes i absented English academy to play with them.>>Sometimes I even got absent in my English academy to play with them.In winter, we also played on the slippery ground. >>correct it is attracted us about own condition.>>We were attracted because of its condition.But strangely, we didn\'t do that at rainy days depending on my rememberance. >>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word REMEMBRANCE)Anyway, we could be felt exciting as won a victory against the other class in my school. >>Anyway, it was really exciting to win the soccer match against other schools.

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