homework-17
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I want to travel to space because I think it is very exciting and interesting.
I want to watch earth in space with my family.
Sometimes I was used to imagine that I visit space.
When I imagine, I am very happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
Thank you for making your homework diligently. I would love to travel into space if i could too. It is possible now but it\'s very expensive.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to travel to space because I think it is very exciting and interesting.
>>correct!
I want to watch earth in space with my family.
>>correct!
Sometimes I was used to imagine that I visit space.
>>I used to imagine that I visited space.
When I imagine, I am very happy.
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