Homework#17
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Hi, good morning! I just worked out at the gym and come back home now. I am so tired..:(
But today is Friday! It makes me more c[이름]rful.
HW#17
The best thing of proving myself is example. I think that I can prove myself by using examples. Also now, I can use the example.
For example, if there is someone who have doubts about me about something like my major, I just show many successful project to them.
So, they wouldn\'t have doubts about me in my major part. I want to tell another example. When I was in military, many people who worked in same part with me doubt my ability to work. They said like that \" He is a newcomer and I think he can\'t do well in physical strength measurement.\" But I showed results which is evaluated when I was in the military school. And I just proved that when I was tested for physical strength in that place where many people said like that.
Consequently, I think the best way is showing examples for proving myself
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Here are my corrections.
The best thing of proving myself is example. I think that I can prove myself by using examples. Also now, I can use the example. For example, if there is someone who have doubts about me about something like my major, I just show many successful project to them.
>>Their are few ways of proving myself. For example, if there is someone who have doubts about something like my major, I just show many of my successful projects to them.
So, they wouldn\'t have doubts about me in my major part. I want to tell another example.
>>So, they wouldn\'t have doubts about me in terms of my major. I want to tell another example.
When I was in military, many people who worked in same part with me doubt my ability to work.
>>correct!
They said like that \" He is a newcomer and I think he can\'t do well in physical strength measurement.\" But I showed results which is evaluated when I was in the military school.
>>They said, \" He is a newcomer and I think he can\'t do well in physical strength measurement.\" But I showed results which was evaluated when I was in the military school.
And I just proved that when I was tested for physical strength in that place where many people said like that. Consequently, I think the best way is showing examples for proving myself
>>And I just proved that when I was tested for physical strength. Consequently, I think the best way is showing examples of what I can do.
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