homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The boxes will arrive (either) today or tomorrow.
2. (Both) Andy and Lee worked at the factory.
3. We are trying to decide (whether) to support the Republicans or to support the Democrats.
4. I haven't driven on snow before, (so) I feel a little nervous.
5. The children were cute, (but) very naughty.
I didn't see an eye doctor.
I was so sleepy, so I took a nap again after finished the class.
I have to go an ophthalmic hospital tomorrow.
By the way, I've been falling a slump these days.
I don't know why I don't want to study.
I think that the hot weather irritates me or The book was finished that I was studing.
I've studied that whole book at once, so I don't like reviewing again.
I don't even do anything except 'POWER ENGLISH' because It is interesting.
Anyway I hope turn back as soon as before when I'd like to study English.
Well, Let's talk tomorrow~
I desire to be great at that time. :-)
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim I\'m so glad that you have an interest in our class each day, that thought alone makes me feel motivated to teach you more. I really do hope that you will not change. If you have some problems about anything just feel-free to tell it to me. Just take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrcetions for you:
1. The boxes will arrive (either) today or tomorrow.>> Correct2. (Both) Andy and Lee worked at the factory.>> Correct3. We are trying to decide (whether) to support the Republicans or to support the Democrats.>> Correct4. I haven\'t driven on snow before, (so) I feel a little nervous.>> Correct5. The children were cute, (but) very naughty.
>> CorrectI didn\'t see an eye doctor.
>> I wasn\'t able to see an eye doctor.I was so sleepy, so I took a nap again after finished the class.
>> I was so sleepy, so I took a nap again after we finished the class.I have to go an ophthalmic hospital tomorrow.
>> I have to go to an ophthalmic hospital tomorrrow.By the way, I\'ve been falling a slump these days.
>> By the way, I\'ve been falling into a slump these days.I don\'t know why I don\'t want to study.
>> CorrectI think that the hot weather irritates me or The book was finished that I was studing.
>> I think it\'s the hot weather that irritates me or the book I finished studying.I\'ve studied that whole book at once, so I don\'t like reviewing again.
>> CorrectI don\'t even do anything except \'POWER ENGLISH\' because it is interesting.
>> CorrectAnyway I hope turn back as soon as before when I\'d like to study English.
>> Anyway, I hope to be back soon as before when I had the passion in studying English.Well, Let\'s talk tomorrow~
>> Well. let\'s talk tomorrow.I desire to be great at that time. :-)
>> I desire to be great in time.
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