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2020-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

1. How do you feel when you are sick? I feel sad when I\'m sick because I spend few days in hospital when I was sick. 2. How do you make yourself feel better when you are sick? Watching Youtube videos makes me feel better. 3. Who takes care of you when you get sick? My grandmother takes care of me when I get sick because both of my parents go to work.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework! 

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


I feel sad when I\'m sick because I spend few days in hospital when I was sick.
>>I feel sad when I\'m sick because I spend a few days in the hospital when I was sick.

Watching Youtube videos makes me feel better.
>>Watching YouTube videos makes me feel better.

My grandmother takes care of me when I get sick because both of my parents go to work.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My grandmother takes care of me when I\'m sick because both of my parents are working.

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