homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. (Einsten) was awarded the Nobel Prize in physics for his work on the photoelectric effect.
2. (The novels) of Willa Catha present an unadorned picture of life on the prairies of the Midwestern United States during the 19th century.
3. With few exceptions, (mammals) are warm-blooded, have live births, and are suckled with milk from their mother's body.
4. By the time of the appearance of "Paulus", (Felix Mendelssohn) was widely recognized as the most famous living composer.
5. The (prodyctions of) the forest reached their highest price in the 1980s.
In case I'll go to my girl friend's house
I'm going to meet your family after few minutes, so I feel nervous.
What will your parents make actions, when I tell them that I have a plan which I will go to England.
You never disappointed that, if they will don't accept my plan.
Because we never don't meet our whole life.
What will happened, have a positive mind.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim Happy Monday!! I think your girlfriend\'s parents will agree with your plan because I think they will feel and think that you reallt care about their daugther that you will sacrifice your time and money just to visit her there. So just cheer up. Don\'t b afraid. I\'ll just talk to you later then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1. (Einsten) was awarded the Nobel Prize in physics for his work on the photoelectric effect.>> Correct2. (The novels) of Willa Catha present an unadorned picture of life on the prairies of the Midwestern United States during the 19th century.>> Correct3. With few exceptions, (mammals) are warm-blooded, have live births, and are suckled with milk from their mother\'s body.>> mammals that4. By the time of the appearance of \"Paulus\", (Felix Mendelssohn) was widely recognized as the most famous living composer.>> Correct5. The (productions of) the forest reached their highest price in the 1980s.>> CorrectIn case I\'ll go to my girl friend\'s house>> In case that I\'ll be going to my girlfriend\'s house.I\'m going to meet your family after few minutes, so I feel nervous.
>> CorectWhat will your parents make actions, when I tell them that I have a plan which I will go to England.
>> What will your parents do if I will tell them that I have a plan of going to England.You never disappointed that, if they will don\'t accept my plan.
>> Would you feel disappointed if they will not agree with my plan?Because we never don\'t meet our whole life.
>> Because we haven\'t seen each other for a long time now.What will happened, have a positive mind.
>> What will happen? Les\'s just have a positive mind about this matter.
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