homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I (am doing) my work now. Do not disturb me.
2. She (likes) cooking food daily.
3. I (will write) a letter tomorrow.
4. I (have been studying) in this school for ten years.
5. I (took) the pen before she did.
As soon as I'm doing homework ,I just arrived a few minutes ago.
My holiday is very interesting but I'm so tired.
I have to take a rest and take a nap after I will finish this homework.
Anyway I happy to made big remembrance before I will go to Australia.
Then I will write to continuation of my letter.
How does you feel getting an English love letter?
Do you have this in your mind?
I want you to happy when you receive this letter.
Recently we have many time of quarrel between you and me.
You know, The quarrel of lovers is the renewal of love.
Hanging in there.
Then, always have a smile, I hope you have good matters all the time.
Until when we meet, going well.
Never forget you are the only one who recieved my love.
I will always love you forever.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim You are such a sweet guy. I wish my boyfriend would be as sweet as you. Just keep on loving your girlfriend and I will support you all the way through. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1. I (am doing) my work now. Do not disturb me.>> Correct2. She (likes) cooking food daily.>> Correct3. I (will write) a letter tomorrow.>> Correct4. I (have been studying) in this school for ten years.>> Correct5. I (took) the pen before she did.>> I had taken the pen before she did.As soon as I\'m doing homework ,I just arrived a few minutes ago.
>> I started answering my homework as soon as I arrived a few minutes ago.My holiday is very interesting but I\'m so tired.
>> CorrectI have to take a rest and take a nap after I will finish this homework.
>> I have to take a rest after I fifnished this homework.Anyway I happy to made big remembrance before I will go to Australia.
>> Anyway, I\'m happy to do memorable things before I will go to Australia.Then I will write to continuation of my letter.>> Then I will continuously write on my letter. How does you feel getting an English love letter?
>> What did you feel after getting an English love letter from me?Do you have this in your mind?
>> Have you thought about this?I want you to happy when you receive this letter.
>> I want you to feel happy whenever you receive a letter from me.Recently we have many time of quarrel between you and me.
>> We recently had quarrels and a lot of misunderstandings.You know, The quarrel of lovers is the renewal of love.
>> But you know, a fight between lovers is the renewal of their love for each other.Hanging in there.
>> Just hang in there.Then, always have a smile, I hope you have good matters all the time.
>> Then always have a smile on your face and hope that everything will be in good terms.Until when we meet, going well.
>> Things will get better until the moment that we\'ll see each other again.Never forget you are the only one who recieved my love.
>> Never forget that you are the only one who receives my undying love.I will always love you forever.
>> Correct (Aaaawwwww.. sooooo sweet!!)
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