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2012-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 karen

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Karen! Thanks for teaching me today.^^ 1.Cooking is one of her hobbies. 2.Cycling is fun. 3.Getting a good job is not easy. 4.Finding a parking space is quite difficult in this area. 5.Driving becomes more and more expensive. 6.No smoking in this area. 7.Working overtime is quite common in this company. 8.Eating fruits and vegetables is good for your health. 9.Making fun of other people is not nice. 10.Learning about other cultures makes people more tolerant. I have a little question for you..Could you give me a homework about Toefl writing? It would be great if possible.Because I'm not getting used to write a mini essay for a Toefl test yet.So... I hope your reponse and have a nice day! See you tomorrow^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sang Hwa, 

Thanks for your answering your homework. Your answers are perfect once again. Don\'t worry, I will be giving you homework more on TOEFL starting tomorrow. I hope it will help you ^^ Anyway, have a wonderful dinner tonight! (Just don\'t eat too much or you\'ll be podong podong like me kkkk) ~___~ Talk to you tomorrow again! 

-t.Karen =^.^=

Hi Karen!

>> Correct! ^^ 

Thanks for teaching me today.^^

>> Correct! ^^ 

1.Cooking is one of her hobbies.

>> Correct! ^^ 

2.Cycling is fun.

>> Correct! ^^ 

3.Getting a good job is not easy.

>> Correct! ^^ 

4.Finding a parking space is quite difficult in this area.

>> Correct! ^^ 

5.Driving becomes more and more expensive.

>> Correct! ^^ 

6.No smoking in this area.

>> Correct! ^^ 

7.Working overtime is quite common in this company.

>> Correct! ^^ 

8.Eating fruits and vegetables is good for your health.

>> Correct! ^^ 

9.Making fun of other people is not nice.

>> Correct! ^^ 

10.Learning about other cultures makes people more tolerant.
>> Correct! ^^ 

I have a little question for you..

>> Correct! ^^ 

Could you give me a homework about Toefl writing?

>> Correct! ^^ 

It would be great if possible.

>> Correct! ^^ 

Because I\'m not getting used to write a mini essay for a Toefl test yet.

>> Because I\'m not getting used to writing a mini essay for a TOEFL test yet.  

>> ** Use the gerund form \"Writing\". 

So...I hope your reponse and have a nice day!

>> So I am hoping for your response and have a nice day!  

See you tomorrow^^

>> Correct! ^^ 

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