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2012-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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1. I have to (make) a telephone call. 2. She didn't (do) her best so she felt sad. 3. It was the first time she didn't (make) the beds. 4. She was late so she didn't (make) breakfast for them. 5. He (did) the assignment, but forgot to bring it to school. Hi lala I bought a ticket for Australia. According to the ticket, The plane is going to leave on 30 August, pass through China and finally arrive at Sydeny. At last I will go there. I'm getting feel really. I will be good at there and I will adapt their culture as soon as quickly. I will appreciate if you pray for me. :-)

강사 첨삭

I\'m so happy that you\'d soon be on your way to Australia. I hope you\'ve made all the necessary preparations for your trip. Judging from your positive attitude, I\'m sure you\'ll be able adapt well. Do have fun and don\'t forget me while you\'re there. T. Lara 1. I have to (make) a telephone call.>>Correct!2. She didn\'t (do) her best so she felt sad.>>Correct!3. It was the first time she didn\'t (make) the beds.>>Correct!4. She was late so she didn\'t (make) breakfast for them.>>Correct!5. He (did) the assignment, but forgot to bring it to school.>>Correct! Hi lala >>Hi Lara!I bought a ticket for Australia. >>Correct!According to the ticket, The plane is going to leave on 30 August, pass through China and finally arrive at Sydeny. >>According to the ticket, the plane is going to leave on the 30th of August, stop over in China and finally arrive in Sydney.At last I will go there. >>At last, I\'ll be able to go there.I\'m getting feel really. >>I\'m feeling really excited.I will be good at there and I will adapt their culture as soon as quickly. >>I will be good there and I will adapt to their culture as soon as possible. >>I will behave well and try to adpat to their culture quickly.I will appreciate if you pray for me. :-) >>Correct!

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