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Hi~ Did you have enjoy lunch? :) Anyway Ritchel, you didn't check one sentence from the yesterday's homework. Please check~! <Homework> - I don't like summer because of the weather. But I like summer vacation. why? I can travel for a long time. :) This year I had a good time with my family in Jeju lsland. I ate a lot of delicious food and I went to famous place. I also enjoyed a beautiful view of Jeju lsland. It was awesome. Next year, I would like to go abroad.Especially Australia. Because If I go Australia in summer, Australia is winter. The reason why I chose the Australia. My sister is well up in Australia and also when I was watching TV, at that time the TV show introduced about Australia. First thing is animal!! I really like a koala and a kangaroo. :)So I would like to see them. I think they are symbols of Australia. Second thing is the Opera house. I am interested in opera, that's why If I have a time I will watch the opera.

Hi! Thank you for a wonderful composition. You were amazing. Keep it up! I am so proud of you because you were able to express your thoughts and ideas well. You were able to construct credible sentences.Great job! I hope that you had a great day.See you! T.Ritchel Hi~ >>CorrectDid you have enjoy lunch? :) >>Did you enjoy your lunch?Anyway Ritchel, you didn\'t check one sentence from the yesterday\'s homework. >>Anyway Ritchel,you didn\'t check one of my sentences from my homework yesterday.Please check~! >>Correct OR >>Kindly check my sentences please.<Homework>- I don\'t like summer because of the weather. >>CorrectBut I like summer vacation. >>Correct why? I can travel for a long time. :) >>CorrectThis year I had a good time with my family in Jeju lsland. >>Correct OR >>This year I had a great time with my family in Jeju lsland.I ate a lot of delicious food and I went to famous place. >>I ate a lot of delicious food and I went to famous places. OR >>I ate a lot of delicious foods and I visited famous places.I also enjoyed a beautiful view of Jeju lsland. >>I also enjoyed the beautiful view of Jeju lsland. It was awesome. >>CorrectNext year, I would like to go abroad.Especially Australia. >>Correct OR >>Next year,I am I would like visit other countries especially Australia.Because If I go Australia in summer, Australia is winter. >>Because if I go to Australia during summer in Korea, it is winter in Australia.The reason why I chose the Australia. >>These are the reasons why I chose Australia. OR >>The following are the reasons why I chose Australia.My sister is well up in Australia and also when I was watching TV, at that time the TV show introduced about Australia. >>My sister is in Autralia and when I was watching the television,a TV show introduced a lot of things about Australia. OR >>My sister in Autralia is doing well and when I was watching the television,a TV show discussed a lot of things about Australia.First thing is animal!! >>The first reason that made me chose Australia is about the animals.I really like a koala and a kangaroo. :) >>I really like koala and kangaroo. So I would like to see them. >>CorrectI think they are symbols of Australia. >>I think they are the symbols of Australia. OR >>I think these animals represents Australia.Second thing is the Opera house. >>Correct OR>>The second reason is about the Opera House.I am interested in opera, that\'s why If I have a time I will watch the opera. >>I am interested about opera, that\'s why If I have time I will watch it.