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2012-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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hi.:) Louice In fact, i 'm busy currently because i conduct my computer project, so i could not homwork~ But i'll do my homework which you gave me for this weekend. <yesterday homework> 1. What kind of phobia do you have? -> I have waterphobia because I fell into a swimming pool when i was in 8. So i don't like to swim and to have fun in water. Also my swimming skill is not really good. 2. What will you do to overcome it ? Although i fear water, swimming is neccesary during emergency situation. Many people says that swimming is very healthful. So i will try to learn swimming though it is difficult for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Iris!

Thank you very much for making time to accomplish your homework. We call fear in water as AQUA PHOBIA. Actually, you are right. Swimming is a survival skill everyone has to learn. However, it might be difficult for those people who had bad experiences in water (like you). I salute your courage and willingness to learn, though. Anyway, see you in class! Take care, Iris. 

-Louise-

hi.:) Louice

>>  Hi, Louise.

 In fact, i \'m busy currently because i conduct my computer project, so i could not homwork~

>> I'm currently busy these days because I have to mke my computer projects, so I wasn't able to do my homework.

 But i\'ll do my homework which you gave me for this weekend.

>> However, I will do the homework you gave last weekend.

 <yesterday homework>

>>  <Yesterday's homework>

 1. What kind of phobia do you have?

 -> I have waterphobia because I fell into a swimming pool when i was in 8.

>> I have fear in water because I fell into a swimming pool when I was 8 years old.

 So i don\'t like to swim and to have fun in water.

>> That's why I don\'t like to swim and to have fun in the water.

 Also my swimming skill is not really good.

>> Correct.

>> Also, my swimming skill is not really good.

 2. What will you do to overcome it ?

 Although i fear water, swimming is neccesary during emergency situation.

>> Although I fear water, swimming is neccesary during an emergency situation.

Many people says that

 swimming is very healthful.

>> Many people say that swimming is very healthy.

>> Many people say that swimming is good for the health.

So i will try to learn swimming though it is difficult for me.

>> So, I will try to learn swimming though it is difficult for me.

 

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