homework
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Hi, Iris!
Thank you very much for making time to accomplish your homework. We call fear in water as AQUA PHOBIA. Actually, you are right. Swimming is a survival skill everyone has to learn. However, it might be difficult for those people who had bad experiences in water (like you). I salute your courage and willingness to learn, though. Anyway, see you in class! Take care, Iris.
-Louise-
hi.:) Louice
>> Hi, Louise.
In fact, i \'m busy currently because i conduct my computer project, so i could not homwork~
>> I'm currently busy these days because I have to mke my computer projects, so I wasn't able to do my homework.
But i\'ll do my homework which you gave me for this weekend.
>> However, I will do the homework you gave last weekend.
<yesterday homework>
>> <Yesterday's homework>
1. What kind of phobia do you have?
-> I have waterphobia because I fell into a swimming pool when i was in 8.
>> I have fear in water because I fell into a swimming pool when I was 8 years old.
So i don\'t like to swim and to have fun in water.
>> That's why I don\'t like to swim and to have fun in the water.
Also my swimming skill is not really good.
>> Correct.
>> Also, my swimming skill is not really good.
2. What will you do to overcome it ?
Although i fear water, swimming is neccesary during emergency situation.
>> Although I fear water, swimming is neccesary during an emergency situation.
Many people says that
swimming is very healthful.
>> Many people say that swimming is very healthy.
>> Many people say that swimming is good for the health.
So i will try to learn swimming though it is difficult for me.
>> So, I will try to learn swimming though it is difficult for me.
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