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<Homework> When I was in England. It is first time to go without family and friends. First, I've never taken a double-decker before. I tried. It is quite funny, but problem is there's no airconditional in the bus. So in summer, too hot. But I don't know still no airconditional in the bus. Anyway second, Pub and football game. English people likes beer and football game. Almost the weekend, I went to the pub with my friends. It was happy time to me. Because we were watching football game when we were eating some food. And also with beer~ :) Third, in England every park is wonderful, especially in summer. In the park, I did game. It's called Frisbee. I really like play this game with my friend. Fourth delicious food. Every sunday lunch, my landlady invited me and served some food for lunch. :) I like syrub sponge cake when she made for me. Fifth, culture and landmark. I went to famous places. For example, Big Ben, National gallery, Tower bridge, Harrods, Buckingham palace... And I watched lots of musical. The best one is The Phamtom of the opera. I've never forgotten this memories. :)

I could only imagine the experience you\'ve had there. I\'m sure it\'s a once in a lifetime event that you\'ll never forget. Anyway, Don\'t be afraid to make mistakes because you will learn from them. Believe in yourself and don\'t ever give up! You can do it! Let\'s work hard together.

T. Ritchel

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When I was in England. It is first time to go without family and friends.

>>It was my first time to travel by myself when I went to England.
First, I\'ve never taken a double-decker before.

>>Correct!
I tried. It is quite funny, but problem is there\'s no airconditional in the bus.

>>I tried and it was quite funny but the problem was, there was no air conditioner in the bus.
So in summer, too hot.

>>So in summer, it\'s too hot.
But I don\'t know still no airconditional in the bus.

>>But I didn\'t know that there aren\'t any air conditioner in the bus.
Anyway second, Pub and football game.

>>Second, I went to a pub and watched a football game.
English people likes beer and football game.

>>English people like beer and football games.
Almost the weekend, I went to the pub with my friends.

>>Almost every weekend, I went to the pub with my friends.
It was happy time to me. Because we were watching football game when we were eating some food.

>>It was a happy time for me because we were watching a football game while eating some food.
And also with beer~ :)

>>We also drank some beer.
Third, in England every park is wonderful, especially in summer.

>>Correct!
In the park, I did game. It\'s called Frisbee.

>>In the park, I played a game called Frisbee.
I really like play this game with my friend.

>>I really like to play this game with my friend.
Fourth delicious food.

>>Fourth, I ate delicious food.

 Every sunday lunch, my landlady invited me and served some food for lunch. :)

>>Correct!
I like syrub sponge cake when she made for me.

>>She makes syrup sponge cakes which I like.
Fifth, culture and landmark.

>>Fifth, the culture and landmarks are amazing.

I went to famous places.

>>Correct!
For example, Big Ben, National gallery, Tower bridge, Harrods, Buckingham palace...

>>For example, Big Ben, the National Gallery, Tower Bridge, Harrods, Buckingham palace and several others.
And I watched lots of musical.
>>I also watched lots of musicals.

The best one is The Phamtom of the opera.

>>Correct!
I\'ve never forgotten this memories. :)

>>I\'ll never forget this memories.