homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
1.runs
2.bark
3.are
4.was
5.worry
Travelling
I often go to travel with my friends. It is one of my hobby. when i was travelling i felt exciting and it gave me a energy. But sometuimes it made me nerves. Especially when i go to travel alone.
I have been to london for 6 month alone for learning to English. And i went
sriranka,bancocok,china, japan, indonesia, sydney, Bali, France,italy,swiss, boracy,hong kong airport.
First thing that i do, i check my room and take a photo.
For me, travelling is so funny and can feel another culture and taste new food.
Because people want to relax from work. After travelling people can work at company ad home.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]! VERY GOOD JOB! You perfect again your homework. It was really nice talking to you again this evening Ma\'am. I t[이름]k you for being such a wonderful person. By the way, you performed really good in our class agaon today because you were able to express the things you did with your friends during the weekend. I am very happy for you Ma\'am! Keep up the improvement. Indeed, travelling is really an interesting activity. I envy you Ma\'am because you have visited many countries. As for me, I am still looking forward to visit some countries. Hahaha! Anyway Ma\'am, I will talk to you again on Thursday. Enjoy your Liberation Day! Yeehaw!
-Teacher Chloe
1.runs
>>Correct 2.bark
>>Correct 3.are
>>Correct 4.was
>>Correct 5.worry
>>Correct Travelling>>Correct I often go to travel with my friends.
>>I often travel with my friends.
It is one of my hobby.
>>It is one of my hobbies.
when i was travelling i felt exciting and it gave me a energy.
>>I felt very excited and I got some energy when we travel.
But sometuimes it made me nerves. Especially when i go to travel alone.>>But sometimes it made me nervous. I have been to london for 6 month alone for learning to English. And i went>>I have been to London for 6 months alone to study English. sriranka,bancocok,china, japan, indonesia, sydney, Bali, France,italy,swiss, boracy,hong kong airport.>>Also, I went to Sri Lanka; Bangkok; China, Japan Indonesia, Sydney, Bali, France, Italy, Swiss, Boracay and HongKong Airport. First thing that i do, i check my room and take a photo.>>The first thing that I do when I travel is to check my reserved room and take photos.For me, travelling is so funny and can feel another culture and taste new food.>>For me, travelling is very funny because you can learn countries' different cultures and you can taste different kind of food. Because people want to relax from work.
>>Moreover, it will relax people.
After travelling people can work at company ad home.
>>After travelling, people need to go back again to work or just stay home.
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