homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi There!!
I hope you\'re going to think more happy and exciting ways to spend your summer vacation!!
Enjoy!!!
~~T.Karen~~
I have waited for the weekend, because of Vacation.
>>I have waited for the weekend because this weekend it\'s our vacation. >>CORRECT!
Aftereffect of vacation is too big for me, so today is different another day.
>>Vacation for me has a big after effect, but today is different, it\'s another day. >>CORRECT!!
I’m going to the Sindolim with Young ju for the movie.
>>I am going to Sindolim with YoungJu to watch a movie. >>CORRECT!
I think it’s been a long time to watching the movie.>>CORRECT!
>>I think it\'s been a long time since the last time I\'ve watched a movie. >>CORRECT!!
We bought popcorn and beverage.
>>We bought some popcorn and some beverage. >>CORRECT!!
When we are waiting for the movie, Young ju had a phone call at 7:30.
>>YoungJu had a phone call at 7:30 while waiting for the movie. >>CORRECT!!
Because Young ju was rather embarrassed, I was curious.
>>YoungJu felt embarrassed so I got curious. >>CORRECT!!
If my guess is right, Young ju may be speaking English.
>>I guess, it\'s because he is speaking in English. >>CORRECT!!
Movie is showed for a long time. But I wasn’t bored
>>The movie was long but I didn\'t get bored. >>CORRECT!!
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