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2012-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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“Burning Friday” I have waited for the weekend, because of Vacation. Aftereffect of vacation is too big for me, so today is different another day. I’m going to the Sindolim with Young ju for the movie. I think it’s been a long time to watching the movie. We bought popcorn and beverage. When we are waiting for the movie, Young ju had a phone call at 7:30. Because Young ju was rather embarrassed, I was curious. If my guess is right, Young ju may be speaking English. Movie is showed for a long time. But I wasn’t bored

강사 첨삭

Hi There!!

I hope you\'re going to think more happy and exciting ways to spend your summer vacation!!

Enjoy!!! 

~~T.Karen~~

I have waited for the weekend, because of Vacation.

>>I have waited for the weekend because this weekend it\'s our vacation. >>CORRECT!
Aftereffect of vacation is too big for me, so today is different another day.

>>Vacation for me has a big after effect, but today is different, it\'s another day. >>CORRECT!!
I’m going to the Sindolim with Young ju for the movie.

>>I am going to Sindolim with YoungJu to watch a movie. >>CORRECT!
 I think it’s been a long time to watching the movie.>>CORRECT!

>>I think it\'s been a long time since the last time I\'ve watched a movie. >>CORRECT!!
We bought popcorn and beverage.

>>We bought some popcorn and some beverage. >>CORRECT!!
When we are waiting for the movie, Young ju had a phone call at 7:30.

>>YoungJu had a phone call at 7:30 while waiting for the movie. >>CORRECT!!
Because Young ju was rather embarrassed, I was curious.

>>YoungJu felt embarrassed so I got curious. >>CORRECT!!
 If my guess is right, Young ju may be speaking English.

>>I guess, it\'s because he is speaking in English. >>CORRECT!!
Movie is showed for a long time. But I wasn’t bored

>>The movie was long but I didn\'t get bored. >>CORRECT!!

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