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2012-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I want to inaugurate my business. Actually, I started a general shop and a clothing shop from 2000 to 2009 But, I was sick. So I closed my business. I want to the small business. I want to operat by oneself.

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Hi there! Thank you very much for sending over your composition. Anyway, we\'ll talk about this later in class. Maybe we can think of a good and profitable business together. See you! Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care. -xoxoT. Camille- I want to inaugurate my business. >> Correct.  Actually, I started a general shop and a clothing shop from 2000 to 2009 >> Actually, I started a general shop and a clothing shop in 2000. It lasted until 2009.  But, I was sick. So I closed my business. >> But since I got sick, I had to close it.  I want to the small business. >> I want to have a small business.  I want to operat by oneself. >> Something that I can operate by myself.

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