Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Gwang Bok Jeol is my country's Independence day.
I always raise a national flag.
I say many historical events to my son inspiring patriotism.
The fact remains that we are korean.
I don't have much patriotic
But, I always try to what can I do for my country.
I love Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Thank you for your composition and for sharing your love for your country. Always be a role model for other Koreans. Anyway, have a great day and see you later in class!
_T. Camille_
Gwang Bok Jeol is my country\'s Independence day.
>> Correct!I always raise a national flag.
>> I always raise our national flag.I say many historical events to my son inspiring patriotism.>> I tell my son stories about patriotism and other historical events. The fact remains that we are korean.>> Correct!I don\'t have much patriotic>> I\'m not very patriotic.But, I always try to what can I do for my country.>> But, I always try my best to do what I can for my country.I love Korea.
>> Correct!
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