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2012-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Gwang Bok Jeol is my country's Independence day. I always raise a national flag. I say many historical events to my son inspiring patriotism. The fact remains that we are korean. I don't have much patriotic But, I always try to what can I do for my country. I love Korea.

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Hello! Thank you for your composition and for sharing your love for your country. Always be a role model for other Koreans. Anyway, have a great day and see you later in class! _T. Camille_ Gwang Bok Jeol is my country\'s Independence day. >> Correct!I always raise a national flag. >> I always raise our national flag.I say many historical events to my son inspiring patriotism.>> I tell my son stories about patriotism and other historical events. The fact remains that we are korean.>> Correct!I don\'t have much patriotic>> I\'m not very patriotic.But, I always try to what can I do for my country.>> But, I always try my best to do what I can  for my country.I love Korea. >> Correct!

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