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<Homework> Oh my god! I can't imagine. :) In my case, I will travel all around the world. Because If I have a lot of money, I can go every where and it will be easy to travel. And I would like to stay at a famous hotel each country. Then, I can see a view of the cities. Also I can eat all kind of foods. I think it is a good experience to me, because If I stay at a famous hotel, the chef also famous. Then, the food tastes will be good. Another things are my family's gift. First, for my father, I will give to him a fantastic car. Second, my mom always dreamed a lovely house. So I will buy a nice house for my mom. Third, my sister likes a bag. I will buy a expensive bag for her. Finally, I will save half of the money to me. And then I will give a little amount of money to poor people. Anyway it is a just imagine but really difficult to me. Because there's not enough time.

Happy Friday! I appreciate your effort in doing your essay. I know that its not easy to get rich but as long as you will work hard, you will be able to achieve your goal. If you can achieve it you will be successful and you will be on your way to get rich! Please check your corrections below. :D T. Ritchel ^^ Oh my god! >>> CORRECT I can\'t imagine. :) >>>CORRECTIn my case, I will travel all around the world. >>>If that is the case, I will be traveling around the world.Because If I have a lot of money, I can go every where and it will be easy to travel. >>>CORRECT >>>It is easy to travel and I can go anywhere if I have a lot of money.And I would like to stay at a famous hotel each country. >>>I would like to stay at a famous hotel in each country that I will visit.Then, I can see a view of the cities. >>>I will be able to see the view of the city.Also I can eat all kind of foods. >>>I can also eat all kinds of food.I think it is a good experience to me, because If I stay at a famous hotel, the chef also famous. >>>If I will stay at a famous hotel, the chef is also famous so it will be a good eperience for me.Then, the food tastes will be good. >>>The food will taste good.Another things are my family\'s gift. >>>Besides these are my family\'s gift.First, for my father, I will give to him a fantastic car. >>>First, I would like to give a fantastic car for my father.Second, my mom always dreamed a lovely house. >>>CORRECT >>>Second, I would give my mom a lovely house that she\'s always dreamed of.So I will buy a nice house for my mom. >>>\'You can remove this sentence.\'Third, my sister likes a bag. >>> CORRECT I will buy a expensive bag for her. >>> I will buy an expensive bag for her.Finally, I will save half of the money to me. >>>Finally, I will save half of the money for me. >>>Finally, I will save half of the money for my future.And then I will give a little amount of money to poor people. >>>I want to give some money to the poor people too.Anyway it is a just imagine but really difficult to me. >>>Anyway, this is just an imagination but in reality its hard.Because there\'s not enough time. >>>CORRECT.