homework

Hi there Ji [이름],

              Good morning! Thank you for this composition. Great job! I made some corrections for you.Please check them out. I hope your completely better. See you later!

~Teacher Verna~

I think, The public has a right know about entertainer private life.

>>I think that the public has the right to know the private life of entertainers.

Entertainer is a part of popular culture itself. 

>>Correct

To earn more money, They are public goods to sale themselves about all kind of their appearance, attitude, personality, even more private life.

>> To earn more money, they are public goods to sell themselves. Like their appearance, attitude, personality, and even more their private lives.

So, They are want to protect private life, It is irony.

>>So they want to protect their private lives. It is an irony.

Also In our life Usually, Star-power is very high to pubic.

>>In our lives, star-power is usually very high.

Always public has a deep interest in stars. 

>>Correct

And star make a constant effort to get interesting from public.

>>And a start makes a constant effort to be interesting to the public.

When we are turn on the TV, We can see it Which is Many entertainers are advertise by themselves to keep informed them.

>>When we turn on the TV, we can see that many entertainers advertise themselves to keep the public informed.

Their private life not theirs just a part of product and issue of public. 

>>Their private lives are not theirs, they are part of the product and issue of the public.

To verna ; this topic is so difficult, So I had some troubled to composition.

>>To Verna, this topic is so difficult so I had trouble doing the composition.

But it is very useful.

>>Correct

I could take some words unusually. 

>>I could use unfamiliar words.

And last my appointment canceld cuz I was sick.

>>And my last appointment was cancelled because I was sick.

So I took pills, niw I’m okay!

>>So, I took a medicine so I\'m okay.

See you tomorrow have a nice the rest of the week.:D

>>See you tomorrow! Have a nice rest this weekend. :D