Homework :)

2012-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

<Homework> 1.malignant - This is a computer virous. The report stated it is a malignant code. 2.malice - Do not bear malice to others. 3.mope - Yesterday, she broke up with him. So she moped about all day. 4.mock - He is rude. So we hate him. 2days ago, he fell down on the corridor. We couldn't stop mock at him. 5.mere - Don't be angry. He is a just mere child.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you so for your composition. High five for your sentences!You were able to create great sentences.Keep it up.I hope that you will have a great week ahead of you.It\'s a brand new start for us.Take Care! Talk to you soon. T.Ritchel Here are my corrections for you: <Homework>1.malignant- This is a computer virous. >>This is a computer virus.The report stated it is a malignant code.>>Correct OR >>The report stated that it is a malignant code.2.malice- Do not bear malice to others.>>Correct3.mope- Yesterday, she broke up with him. >>CorrectSo she moped about all day.>>So she moped all day. >>So she moped about it all day.4.mock- He is rude. So we hate him. >>Correct2days ago, he fell down on the corridor. >>Two days ago, he fell down the corridor.We couldn\'t stop mock at him.>>We couldn\'t stop mocking him.5.mere- Don\'t be angry. >>CorrectHe is a just mere child. >>Correct

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