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2012-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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My major is Arabic. I’ve been to Syria as a exchange student. When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture through them. A party is it. Of course, We have party, but It’s different a little. We, too make a yammy food, invite our friends. Then We spend funny time. But my point is, Just with ‘close friends’. It’s a normal. But, in my experience, foreigners are invite all friends with unclose all friends, Just they were meet 1 time. After that, They were getting to know each other and be friends. Many Koreans, and Me, Many-times be shy to strangers. But I am changed now. I think a meet Which is with New face, it’s really exciting & interesting to me and I hope Koreans do not be shy about it. To verna : I am reading your memo, and I think, you are right. I really appreciate your deeply interesting to me. ^^ actually I feel afraid of speaking by Eng. So by your opinion, I will try it. Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you so much again for having class with me and for sending this one. I guess being shy to strangers is just normal. That\'s because you are not yet comfortable to speak out when you get to meet a new person for the first time. Though I am glad that you learned to overcome that. Anyway, I\'d like to remind you that there are only four types that you need to capitalize:1. The first word of your sentence. 2. The first person singular pronoun, \"I\". 3.  Important Words in Titles (exmaple: Beauty and the Beast). 4. Proper Nouns (example: Sally, Korea, Jeju Island) Kindly take note of that. :) I\'ll see you again tomorrow! I hope you\'ll have a great night! ~Teacher Verna My major is Arabic. >> Correct! >> OR I majored in Arabic. I’ve been to Syria as a exchange student. >> I\'ve been to Syria as an exchange student. When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture through them. >> When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture. A party is it. Of course, We have party, but It’s different a little. >> There was some parties. Of course, we had some parties, but it\'s a bit different. We, too make a yammy food, invite our friends. >> We made yummy foods and invited our friends. Then We spend funny time. >> Then we spent fun time. But my point is, Just with ‘close friends’. >> Though I meant, just with \"close friends\". It’s a normal. >> It\'s normal. But, in my experience, foreigners are invite all friends with unclose all friends, Just they were meet 1 time. >> But in my experience, foreigners would invite all their friends be it new friends or old friends. After that, They were getting to know each other and be friends. >> After that, they get to know each other and become friends. Many Koreans, and Me, Many-times be shy to strangers. >> Most Koreans, including me, we are shy to strangers. But I am changed now. >> But I have changed now. I think a meet Which is with New face, it’s really exciting & interesting to me and I hope Koreans do not be shy about it. >> I think the first meeting with new faces is really exciting and interesting to me and I hope Koreans should not be shy about it. To verna : I am reading your memo, and I think, you are right. I really appreciate your deeply interesting to me. ^^ >> To Verna : I am reading your memo, and I think you are right. I really appreciate your deep interest about me. ^^actually I feel afraid of speaking by Eng. >> Actually, I feel afraid of speaking English. So by your opinion, I will try it. >> So by your opinion, I will try to do it. Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20 >> Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20. (Do not forget to end your sentence with a period.)

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