homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My major is Arabic. I’ve been to Syria as a exchange student. When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture through them. A party is it. Of course, We have party, but It’s different a little. We, too make a yammy food, invite our friends. Then We spend funny time. But my point is, Just with ‘close friends’. It’s a normal. But, in my experience, foreigners are invite all friends with unclose all friends, Just they were meet 1 time. After that, They were getting to know each other and be friends. Many Koreans, and Me, Many-times be shy to strangers. But I am changed now. I think a meet Which is with New face, it’s really exciting & interesting to me and I hope Koreans do not be shy about it.
To verna : I am reading your memo, and I think, you are right. I really appreciate your deeply interesting to me. ^^ actually I feel afraid of speaking by Eng. So by your opinion, I will try it. Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you so much again for having class with me and for sending this one. I guess being shy to strangers is just normal. That\'s because you are not yet comfortable to speak out when you get to meet a new person for the first time. Though I am glad that you learned to overcome that.
Anyway, I\'d like to remind you that there are only four types that you need to capitalize:1. The first word of your sentence.
2. The first person singular pronoun, \"I\".
3. Important Words in Titles (exmaple: Beauty and the Beast).
4. Proper Nouns (example: Sally, Korea, Jeju Island)
Kindly take note of that. :)
I\'ll see you again tomorrow! I hope you\'ll have a great night!
~Teacher Verna
My major is Arabic.
>> Correct!
>> OR I majored in Arabic.
I’ve been to Syria as a exchange student.
>> I\'ve been to Syria as an exchange student.
When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture through them.
>> When I stayed there, I met a lot of foreign friends with different backgrounds and various culture.
A party is it. Of course, We have party, but It’s different a little.
>> There was some parties. Of course, we had some parties, but it\'s a bit different.
We, too make a yammy food, invite our friends.
>> We made yummy foods and invited our friends.
Then We spend funny time.
>> Then we spent fun time.
But my point is, Just with ‘close friends’.
>> Though I meant, just with \"close friends\".
It’s a normal.
>> It\'s normal.
But, in my experience, foreigners are invite all friends with unclose all friends, Just they were meet 1 time.
>> But in my experience, foreigners would invite all their friends be it new friends or old friends.
After that, They were getting to know each other and be friends.
>> After that, they get to know each other and become friends.
Many Koreans, and Me, Many-times be shy to strangers.
>> Most Koreans, including me, we are shy to strangers.
But I am changed now.
>> But I have changed now.
I think a meet Which is with New face, it’s really exciting & interesting to me and I hope Koreans do not be shy about it.
>> I think the first meeting with new faces is really exciting and interesting to me and I hope Koreans should not be shy about it. To verna : I am reading your memo, and I think, you are right. I really appreciate your deeply interesting to me. ^^
>> To Verna : I am reading your memo, and I think you are right. I really appreciate your deep interest about me. ^^actually I feel afraid of speaking by Eng.
>> Actually, I feel afraid of speaking English.
So by your opinion, I will try it.
>> So by your opinion, I will try to do it.
Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20
>> Thanks a lot and see you tomorrow at 12:20. (Do not forget to end your sentence with a period.)
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