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2012-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Let's chip in poor people for our own good. 2. We hung on until the concert start in this hall. 3. I pass out from summer heat. 4. Suddenly, there was not my passport in my bag. I slowly found it. Finally, it turn up in my pocket. 5. I ran into my ex-boyfriend in the coffee shop.

강사 첨삭

A wonderful Tuesday to you! (^;^) Thank you so much  for doing your homework. You did an excellent job. I\'m so proud of you.  Anyway, please be guided with the corrections that I made below. Have a great day and I\'ll talk to you late. Take care! ~~ T. Cam ~~ 1. Let\'s chip in poor people for our own good.>>Let\'s chip in for the poor people, it\'s for our own good.2. We hung on until the concert start in this hall.>>We hanged on until the concert started in this hall.3. I pass out from summer heat.>>I passed out from the summer heat.4. Suddenly, there was not my passport in my bag.>>Suddenly, there was no passport in my bag.I slowly found it. >>CORRECT!Finally, it turn up in my pocket. >>Finally, it turned up in my pocket.5. I ran into my ex-boyfriend in the coffee shop. >>CORRECT!

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