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2012-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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<Homework> What I fered the most... First things are all kinds of insect. Especially, I really hate something has a lot of legs. It looks like a centipede. I don't like insects. Most important thing is insects's apperence is very disgusting. And some insects have a bad effect to whole world. Another reason is I don't want to go to the mountain. In the mountain, there's a variety of insects are live there. Second thing is a ghost. I am scared. So I don't like to see a horror movie. If I see a horror movie, I can't sleep at night. And I've heared some rumors about the movie. When they made a horror movie, at that time something mysterious things are happened at the studio. It makes me more horrible. Last thing is a very dangerous and horrible thing. It is about the murderer. I think murderer is a most scared thing. Because we can meet anytime and anywhere. The murderer is a human. When I saw the news, the announcer said about the murderer. These days, some people died because of the murderer. There is a no reason, even they don't know each other. Can you imagine?

강사 첨삭

Hi there! These three things you mentioned make me scared too, especially the last one.  That\'s why we all have to be extra cautious. Thanks for doing your homework though. Good job! Kindly check the corrections I made for your work. I\'ll see you tomorrow! Take care! ~Teacher Ritchel What I fered the most... >> What I fear the most . . .First things are all kinds of insect. >> First, I fear all kinds of insects.Especially, I really hate something has a lot of legs. >> I really hate the kind with so many legs.It looks like a centipede. >> Correct!I don\'t like insects. >> Correct! Most important thing is insects\'s apperence is very disgusting. >> The insect\'s appearance is the most important thing but it is very disgusting.And some insects have a bad effect to whole world. >> And some insects even have bad effects to whole world.Another reason is I don\'t want to go to the mountain. >> Another reason is climbing a mountain. >> OR Another thing I fear is going to the mountains.In the mountain, there\'s a variety of insects are live there. >> There are various kind of insects living in the mountains. Second thing is a ghost. >> The second thing I fear the most is a ghost.I am scared. >> Correct! So I don\'t like to see a horror movie. >> Correct!If I see a horror movie, I can\'t sleep at night. >> Correct!And I\'ve heared some rumors about the movie. >> And I hear a lot of rumors about the movie.When they made a horror movie, at that time something mysterious things are happened at the studio. >> When they make a horror movie, something mysterious happens at the studio.It makes me more horrible. >> It makes me feel more horrible.Last thing is a very dangerous and horrible thing. >> Correct!It is about the murderer. >> Correct!I think murderer is a most scared thing. >> I think a murderer is the most thing I get scared of.Because we can meet anytime and anywhere. >> Because we can meet him anytime and anywhere.The murderer is a human. >> Correct!When I saw the news, the announcer said about the murderer. >> I saw the news where the announcer said something about the murderer.These days, some people died because of the murderer. >> Correct!There is a no reason, even they don\'t know each other. >> There is no reason why they have been killed. They do not even know each other.Can you imagine? >> Correct!

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