homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
John's Life
A Verb-Form Exercise: Read the text carefully and change the verbs to the correct form.
John was born on a little farm back East. He was happy even though he (lived) a harsh life cultivating his field. One day he (woke up) by a heavy storm. When the storm (let up) he (see) that his plantation (destroyed) He (felt) despondent and (decided) that he could no longer live on the farm. He (had) to move somewhere else. He (left) the farm and (came) to the city. The hustle and bustle of the city (frightened) John a lot, but he (didn't want) to go back to his farm. John's life in the city was very difficult. The only person he (could count on) was Tom, a distant relative, who was a very patient and understanding person and who (tried) to help John to get used to (live) in the city.
강사 첨삭
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T. JanE ^^
John was born on a little farm back East. He was happy even though he (lived) a harsh life cultivating his field.
>> Correct
One day he (woke up) by a heavy storm.
>> One day he (was woken up) by a heavy storm.
When the storm (let up) he (see) that his plantation (destroyed)
>> When the storm (let up) he (saw) that his plantation (has been destroyed)
He (felt) despondent and (decided) that he could no longer live on the farm.
>> Correct
He (had) to move somewhere else.
>> Correct
He (left) the farm and (came) to the city.
>> Correct
The hustle and bustle of the city (frightened) John a lot, but he (didn\'t want) to go back to his farm.
>> Correct
John\'s life in the city was very difficult. The only person he (could count on) was Tom, a distant relative, who was a very patient and understanding person and who (tried) to help John to get used to (live) in the city.
>> The only person he (could count on) was Tom, a distant relative, who was a very patient and understanding person and who (tried) to help John to get used to (living) in the city.
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