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<Homework> Every year the university students are going to the camp in Korea. We called 'MT'. Anyway a few years ago, my birthday was during the MT. But the problem was I and my friends belonged to different group each other. So we couldn't have a time together. When the clock pointed at 12am. Suddenly the light turned off, my friends came to me and sang a song. And they brought a pretty cake. They've already known about my birthday. So they prepared my birthday party.:) I really surprised, because I couldn't realized that. After the party, we went out. The reason why my friends brought some firecrackers. At the middle of the playground we did a firework. We had a really great time. It was wonderful fireworks to me. lol After my birthday, one of my friends invited me at dinner. My friend bought me a nice meal at the restaurant. So I ate a lot of food. I will never forget.

Hi! Thank you for sending me your composition. Great job!  Keep it up my dear. Congratulations because you were able to express your ideas well.  I really appreciate your effort during our class. Take Care. Talk to you again. T.Ritchel Here are my corrections for you: <Homework>Every year the university students are going to the camp in Korea. >>Every year university students go to the camp in Korea. OR >>The university students go to the camp every year in Korea.We called \'MT\'. >>We called it \"MT\"Anyway a few years ago, my birthday was during the MT. >>CorrectBut the problem was I and my friends belonged to different group each other. >>But the problem was,my friends and I belonged to different groups. OR >>But the problem was,my friends and I were part of different groups.So we couldn\'t have a time together. >>We didn\'t have time to be together.When the clock pointed at 12am. >>Correct OR >>When the clock striked at 12 a.m.Suddenly the light turned off, my friends came to me and sang a song. >>CorrectAnd they brought a pretty cake. >>CorrectThey\'ve already known about my birthday. So they prepared my birthday party.:) >>They knew about my birthday. So they prepared my birthday party.:)I really surprised, because I couldn\'t realized that. >>I was really surprised because I didn\'t realized that they know my birthday.After the party, we went out. >>CorrectThe reason why my friends brought some firecrackers. >>My friends brought some firecrakers/At the middle of the playground we did a firework. >>CorrectWe had a really great time. >>We really had a great time.It was wonderful fireworks to me. lol >>It was a wonderful fireworks display for me.After my birthday, one of my friends invited me at dinner. >>After my birthday,one of my friends invited me for dinner.My friend bought me a nice meal at the restaurant. >>Correct OR >>My friend bought me a delicious meal at the restaurant.So I ate a lot of food. >>CorrectI will never forget. >>I will never forget that day.