Homework

I really agree with that statement. I feel this way because, first of all, living in a small town makes person more relaxed in the nature. And second of all, I'm kind of person who likes to live in a countryside.Actually I want to live in a suburbun rather than a big city after I got more ages and retire. Eventhough It would be more comfortable to buy something by going to the big supermarket in the city and enjoy bustling life in it,life in the country gives another pleasant to people such as wonderful view nature gives us, and we don't have to hear all the noises I suffer from If I live in the big city but the bird's vibrant voice. As a result, I assert that it's better to live in a small town than a big city. Hi Karen ! Sorry to writing last homework today ㅠㅠ.

A very good job once again Sang Hwa! ^^

Don\'t worry too much about making your homework late. I totally understand (= I like your answer by the way ^^. Me too, when I grow older, I want to live in the countryside. I have made the corrections by the way, so please read them (= IF you have any questions, you know where to get me. ^^

-t.Karen =^.^=

I really agree with that statement.

>> Correct! ^^ 

I feel this way because, first of all, living in a small town makes person more relaxed in the nature.

>> I feel this way because, first of all, living in a small town makes a person more relaxed with nature. 

>> **Don\'t forget the article \"A\" because you are only talking about one person.

And second of all, I\'m kind of person who likes to live in a countryside.

>> And second of all, I\'m the kind of person who likes to live in a countryside. 

>> **Don\'t forget the article \"The\" because you are talking about a specific kind of person/personality.

Actually I want to live in a suburbun rather than a big city after I got more ages and retire. 

>> Actually I want to live in the suburbs rather than a big city after I get old and retire. 

>> Actually I want to live in a suburban area rather than a big city after I get old and retire. 

>> ** Good vocabulary but be careful with your spelling. 

>> ** \"Suburbs\" is a noun while \"Suburban\"  is the adjective form. 

Eventhough It would be more comfortable to buy something by going to the big supermarket in the city and enjoy bustling life in it,life in the country gives another pleasant to people such as wonderful view nature gives us, and we don\'t have to hear all the noises I suffer from If I live in the big city but the bird\'s vibrant voice.

>>  Even though it would be more comfortable to buy something by going to the big supermarket in the city and enjoy bustling life in it,life in the country gives other pleasant things to people such as wonderful view nature gives us, and we don\'t have to hear all the noises I suffer from if we live in the big city, but the bird\'s vibrant voice.

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of \"it\" and \"if\" because they are not proper nouns. You only capitalize a letter if:

a. It is the first letter in a sentence. 

b. It is the pronoun \"I\". 

c. If it is a proper noun. 

>> ** You need to be constant with your pronouns, you started with \"we\" it\'s better to stick with it. 

>> ** \"Pleasant\" is an adjective so make sure to add a noun that it will modify. 

As a result, I assert that it\'s better to live in a small town than a big city.
>> Correct! ^^ 

Hi Karen !

>> Correct! ^^ 

Sorry to writing last homework today ㅠㅠ.

>> Sorry for writing the last homework late. 

OR 

>> Sorry for writing the last homework today. 

>> ** Use the preposition \"For\" instead of \"to\".