Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I think
My generation is different from my parent's generation.
Nowadays, I feel most of them.
For example
My mom gets sulky at eh slightest scolding.
And then, she is full of cares.
Everyday she worries about many thing.
Maybe my mom is old women.
Finally, I will become my mon's generation.
I am scary.
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Actually, I think>>correctMy generation is different from my parent\'s generation.>>correctNowadays, I feel most of them.>>correctFor example>>correctMy mom gets sulky at eh slightest scolding.>>My mom gets sulky at the slightest scolding.And then, she is full of cares.>>And then she cares about everything.Everyday she worries about many thing.>>Everyday she worries about many things.Maybe my mom is old women.>>Maybe my mom is already old.Finally, I will become my mon\'s generation.>>And finally, I will get to experience what my mom feels.I am scary. >>I\'m scared.
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