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<Homework> I cna't imagine... But If it will be happened to me. First, I need all kinds of means of communication. Because I have to connect with people like a police man or my family. Then I can survied from the island. If I can not do any communication with people, I have to live alone in an island. Second, its some foods!!! The foods are the necessities of life. If I didn't eat anything for a few days, I can't live anymore. So food is important thing to me. Another reason is I can't hunt animals or fishes. I don't know how to hunt them. The last one is friend. In my case, the friend mean the human and the animal. If it dosen't allow a person who stay with me in an island. Then, I have to keep a dog or another animal. Because I don't want to live alone. I am scared, I have no idea about that place. Especilly there is not an failiar place to me. So I need a friend.

Hi there! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I really appreciate that! I think you did a great job. But I know you can do even better. I believe in you and I am more than happy to help you study and learn English and become really excellent at it. Take care! -----T. Ritchel----   I cna\'t imagine... >>>I can\'t imagine it.But If it will be happened to me. >>>But if it will happen to me.First, I need all kinds of means of communication. >>>First, I would need all means of communication.Because I have to connect with people like a police man or my family. >>>CORRECTThen I can survied from the island. >>>Then I can survive in the island.If I can not do any communication with people, I have to live alone in an island. >>>If I cannot communicate with people, I have to live alone in an island.Second, its some foods!!! >>>The second important thing is food. The foods are the necessities of life. >>>Food is a necessity of life.If I didn\'t eat anything for a few days, I can\'t live anymore. >>>CORRECTSo food is important thing to me. >>>So food is an important thing to me.Another reason is I can\'t hunt animals or fishes. >>>Another reason is I can\'t hunt animals or fish.I don\'t know how to hunt them. >>>CORRECTThe last one is friend. >>>The last one is a friend.  In my case, the friend mean the human and the animal. >>>In my case, a friend means both a human and an animal.If it dosen\'t allow a person who stay with me in an island. >>>If it doesn\'t allow a person to stay with me in an island.Then, I have to keep a dog or another animal. >>>CORRECTBecause I don\'t want to live alone. >>>CORRECTI am scared, I have no idea about that place. >>>CORRECTEspecilly there is not an failiar place to me. >>>Especially that it is not a familiar place to me.So I need a friend. >>>CORRECT