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<Homework> I am interested in a fashion. So I want to work at the fashion magazine. For example, one of the movies, the title is 'The devil wears Prada'. In the movie, one of the characters is 'Miranda'. She's job is a fashion magazine editor. She has a lot of confidence and she wears very fashionably. So she looks like a person who has all things. I think Miranda character was so impressive. That's why I want to be a fashion magazine editor. If I become a fashion magazine editor, I can wear famous designer's clothes. I can go all around the world's fashion show. I will go to Paris, Milano, London, Tokyo and Seoul as well. Maybe I become a famous person like a Hollywood star. Anyway it is just a dream. In the real world, I am an ordinary person. But I am okay. Because I have a another dream. The dream is coming true. Then, I can work as soon as possible. So I am studying at the moment for my future. :)

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I find your passion for fashion enthralling. I think you like fashion a lot, that\'s okay because I do too. It is not a bad thing to dream, everyone should have a dream because it will motivate them to do very well in their job or in their life. So keep dreaming [이름]! I know that with your determination, you will be able to make those dreams come true. Take care! --------T. Ritchel-------     I am interested in a fashion. >>>I am interested in fashion. So I want to work at the fashion magazine. >>>So I want to work for a fashion magazine.For example, one of the movies, the title is \'The devil wears Prada\'. >>>For example, in one of the movies entitled \"The devil wears Prada\".In the movie, one of the characters is \'Miranda\'. >>>In the movie, one of the character\'s name is \"Miranda\".She\'s job is a fashion magazine editor. >>>Her job is a fashion magazine editor.She has a lot of confidence and she wears very fashionably. >>>She has a lot of confidence and she dressed very fashionably.So she looks like a person who has all things. >>>So she looks like a person who has everything.I think Miranda character was so impressive. >>>I think Miranda\'s character was so impressive.That\'s why I want to be a fashion magazine editor. >>>CORRECT If I become a fashion magazine editor, I can wear famous designer\'s clothes. >>>CORRECTI can go all around the world\'s fashion show. >>>I can go all around the world to see fashion shows.I will go to Paris, Milano, London, Tokyo and Seoul as well. >>>I will go to Paris, Milan, London, Tokyo and Seoul as well.Maybe I become a famous person like a Hollywood star. >>>Maybe I can become a famous person like a Hollywood star. Anyway it is just a dream. >>>CORRECTIn the real world, I am an ordinary person. >>>CORRECTBut I am okay. >>>CORRECTBecause I have a another dream. >>>Because I have another dream.The dream is coming true. >>>CORRECT Then, I can work as soon as possible. >>>CORRECTSo I am studying at the moment for my future. :) >>>CORRECT