homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream job is a build of the hotel. I'm interested in comfortable travel for the family who lives with children, their parents. When I went to travel somewhere, most of hotel is very expensive or sometimes unkindly.I have a some special strategies so if I build a hotel, I'll do my best for the business.
강사 첨삭
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-----T. Ritchel-----
My dream job is a build of the hotel.
>>>My dream job is to build a hotel.
I\'m interested in comfortable travel for the family who lives with children, their parents.
>>>I\'m interested in comfortable travel for the family who lives with children and their parents.
When I went to travel somewhere, most of hotel is very expensive or sometimes unkindly.
>>>When I went to travel somewhere, most of the hotels are very expensive or sometimes unkind.
I have a some special strategies so if I build a hotel, I\'ll do my best for the business.
>>>I have some special strategies so if I build a hotel, I\'ll do my best for the business.
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