Homework 18
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers.
A. I agree that parents are the best teachers. Parents have taken an important role throughout my life. Most of my lifestyle take after my parents. A lot of people have passed me so far but they were only to have an impact on part of my life. My parents have taught me to become a diligent and wise person by showing themselves to live so. I respect how they love, grow children and live their social life. I try to follow their life but I could never catch up with it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You are right! Our very first teachers are our parents. Most of what we are and what we have become, we owe it to our parents. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I agree that parents are the best teachers.
>>CORRECT
Parents have taken an
important role throughout my life.
>>CORRECT (*My parents...)
Most of my lifestyle take after my
parents.
>>I take after my parents most of my lifestyle.
A lot of people have passed me so far but they were only to
have an impact on part of my life.
>>A lot of people have gone through my life but they only partly made an impact in my life.
My parents have taught me to become a
diligent and wise person by showing themselves to live so.
>>My parents have shown to us through their actions diligence and wisdom.
I respect
how they love, grow children and live their social life.
>>I respect how they have raised and loved us and lived their social life.
I try to follow
their life but I could never catch up with it.
>>I try to follow in their footsteps but I think I could never catch up with them.
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