Homework 18

ESSAY: What do you think is the main reason that married people have divorce? I think difference in personality is the main reason that married people have divorce. In the earlier time when people meet each other, they usually try to understand the difference between two. However, they lose the desire to understand each other as time goes by. Finally, they give up to understand difference and to be together.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for sharing and I do agree that most Divorce cases are related to people realizing their differences after getting married. I think that people must be very sure about their partners before they agree on marriage and sharing a home. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think difference in personality is the main reason that married people have divorce.   >> I think the difference in personality is the main reason that married people have divorce.  In the earlier time when people meet each other, they usually try to understand the difference between two. >> In the earlier times when people meet each other, they usually try to understand the differences between two. However, they lose the desire to understand each other as time goes by. >> CORRECT OR> They eventaully fall out of love with each other. Finally, they give up to understand difference and to be together. >>  Finally, they give up understanding their differences and to be together.