homework-18
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't like my teenage years because when I was teenager, my family was very poor.
However my twenties are very good.
Becuase I got my job, I could save money and I met my husband. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Wow! perefct sentences. Job well done, Ms. [이름]. Keep it up! See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t like my teenage years because when I was a teenager, my family was very poor.>>correct!
However my twenties are very good.
>>correct!Becuase I got my job, I could save money and I met my husband. ^^
>>correct!
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