Homework#18
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Hi, teacher! Today homework is so tough... Anyway, here are my opinions.
HW#18 What do you think can solve traffic?
I think the best way to solve traffic is that the government makes some regulations.
In my country, specially Seoul, There are so many cars and motorcycles.
When I go to somewhere, I\'ve got traffic jam in the morning because many people commute to their company at the time.
It is terrible. So, if the government makes some regulations about traffic like Only using public transportation.
We are using that regulation now but , It doesn\'t working well..
This is first method I think.
Another method is making more parking lots. If you come to Korea, you can see some cars parked on the street easily.
I think it also makes traffic jam because they occupy the road.
So, Making parking lot is helpful to solve traffic
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Thanks for doing your homework even if it sounds tough.
You\'re doing great!
Here are my corrections.
I think the best way to solve traffic is that the government makes some regulations.
>>I think the best way to solve traffic is that the government should make some regulations.
In my country, specially Seoul, There are so many cars and motorcycles.
>>In my country, specially Seoul, there are so many cars and motorcycles.
When I go to somewhere, I\'ve got traffic jam in the morning because many people commute to their company at the time.
>>When I go somewhere, I meet traffic jam in the morning because many people commute to their company at the time.
It is terrible. So, if the government makes some regulations about traffic like Only using public transportation.
>>It is terrible. So, the government should make some regulations about traffic like, \"Use public transportation only.\"
We are using that regulation now but , It doesn\'t working well..
>>We are following that regulation now, but, it doesn\'t work well.
This is first method I think.
>>This is the first method I thought.
Another method is making more parking lots. If you come to Korea, you can see some cars parked on the street easily.
>>Correct!
I think it also makes traffic jam because they occupy the road.
>>I think this also makes traffic jam because they occupy the road.
So, Making parking lot is helpful to solve traffic
>>So, making parking lots is helpful to solve traffic jams.
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