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Trust is a first on my list. If we don't have a trust each other, we cannot keep in touch relationship anymore even though we already has had long period.
Same hobby is a second on my list. It's the more easy way when we want to get more close.
I think as upper list is enough.
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Trust is a first on my list.
>>Trust is the first on my list.
If we don\'t have a trust each other, we cannot keep in touch relationship anymore even though we already has had long period. >>If we don\'t have trust towards each other, we cannot keep in touch with our relationship anymore eventhough we already had this for a long period of time.
Same hobby is a second on my list.
>>Having the same hobby is the second on my list.
It\'s the more easy way when we want to get more close.
>>It\'s the easiest way to get close to someone.I think as upper list is enough.
>>I think the list above is enough.
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