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When I was December of 29, I thought that I'm 30 soon, but what was my life? and what will I have to do my better future? The reason of above is I guess 30 age is a symbol of adult, more independence by myself. Of course my parents are still alive. Anyway, so I wrote the my plan for better life. If I implement my plan, I can speak talk about English and Japanese in fluence. My wife can speak Japanese very well since she lived 4 years when she was a young. So my wife helps me for the Japanese now. It's the base for my dream. As I wrote before, my dream is to build a hotel that most of hotels were visited by foreigners. So languege study is very important to me.

Hello there! You have a very wonderful goal in life. I hope that you will be able to achieve all of it after 10 years. Anyway, I already made your corrections below so please find time to check them out later. For the meantime, enjoy your day and please take care. When I was December of 29, I thought that I\'m 30 soon, but what was my life? >>When it\'ll be December 29th, I\'m thinking that I\'m turning 30 soon, but what will be my life? and what will I have to do my better future? >>What do I have to do to have a better future?The reason of above is I guess 30 age is a symbol of adult, more independence by myself. >>The reason for this is I guess 30 is the age of becoming an adult. I\'ll gain more independence for myself. Of course my parents are still alive. >>CORRECT! >>My parents are still alive.Anyway, so I wrote the my plan for better life. >>Anyway, I wrote a plan for a better life. If I implement my plan, I can speak talk about English and Japanese in fluence. >>If I implement my plan, I can speak and talk in English and Japanese fluently. My wife can speak Japanese very well since she lived 4 years when she was a young. >>My wife can speak Japanese very well since she lived in Japan for 4 years when she was young. So my wife helps me for the Japanese now. >>My wife helps me study Japanese now. It\'s the base for my dream. >>It\'s the basis for my dream. As I wrote before, my dream is to build a hotel that most of hotels were visited by foreigners. >>As I wrote before, my dream is to build a hotel that is visited by foreigners. So languege study is very important to me. >>So language study is very important for me.