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2012-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I don't think so I have a winter escapade becasue I'll be very busy for my baby. :-) But anyway Korea has a winter that is the reason we have many winter sport like play skiing, skating, snowboarding and others. When I was elementary school student, my father played together ski. After that I like the ski so we went to play the ski lots of time. This year, also, I'm going to ski with my friends. Actually, I and my wife don't like cold. We're going to holiday where is more warm than Korea. I know about the Philippines where is very beautiful place and consists of many islands. I went to there when I was 14th. I remember I told you befor our class about it. At that time, It's so impressive. So it's the one of the place what we going to have a holiday. The other place is Hong-Kong, Vietnam and Guam.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I\'m so excited for your baby... soon!  I hope that you will have a healthy baby.  Anyway, I\'m quite impressed with the winter plans that you have. How I wish I could go skiing and experience other fun winter activities that your country has to offer. For the meantime, have a great day and I\'ll call you again tomorrow. I don\'t think so I have a winter escapade becasue I\'ll be very busy for my baby. :-)>>I don\'t think I\'ll be having a winter escapade because I\'ll be very busy taking care of my baby.But anyway Korea has a winter that is the reason we have many winter sport like play skiing, skating, snowboarding and others. >>Anyway, Korea has winter season that\'s why we have many winter sports like skiing, skating, snowboarding and others. When I was elementary school student, my father played together ski. >>When I was an elementary school students, me and father plays ski together. After that I like the ski so we went to play the ski lots of time. >>Since then, I liked ski so we go play ski lots of times. This year, also, I\'m going to ski with my friends.>>This year, I\'m also going ski with my friends.Actually, I and my wife don\'t like cold. >>Actually, me and my wife don\'t like the cold weather. We\'re going to holiday where is more warm than Korea. >>We\'re going somewhere for our holiday where it is warmer than Korea. I know about the Philippines where is very beautiful place and consists of many islands. >>I know the Philippines is a very beautiful place and it consists of many islands. I went to there when I was 14th. >>I went there when I was 14. I remember I told you befor our class about it. >>I remember I told you before in our class about it. At that time, It\'s so impressive. >>During that time, it looks so impressive. >>At that time, I was impressed with the scenery. So it\'s the one of the place what we going to have a holiday. >>So, it\'s one of the places that we\'re planning to go to this holiday.The other place is Hong-Kong, Vietnam and Guam. >>Other places would be Hong Kong, Vietnam, or Guam.

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