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2012-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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hello :) Louice.Good morning . Thanks to your anxious, i didn't have big harm from typhoon. so i'm happy, then can you check my homework? 1.Intend --> He intend to move to a rural after two months. 2.Apparent --> This picture is apparent clue which prove his innocence. 3.concept --> The board of directors is very satisfied this concept.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Iris!

Thank you very much for doing your homework. Anyway, I am very happy to know that you were safe yesterday. I was a little worried thinking that it'll be a strong typhoon. It's good to know that it wasn't as strong as what we expected. See you later in class! Have a great day ahead.

-Louise-

hello :) Louice.

>> Hello, Louise! :)

Good morning .

>> Correct. Just be careful with the correct location of your punctuation mark.

>> Good morning.

 Thanks to your anxious, i didn\'t have big harm from typhoon.

>> Thank you for your advice. I was not harmed by the typhoon.

so i\'m happy, then can you check my homework?

>> That's why I am happy. Anyway, can you please check my homework?

 1.Intend

 --> He intend to move to a rural after two months.

>> Correct.

 2.Apparent

 --> This picture is apparent clue which prove his innocence.

>> This picture is an apparent clue which proves his innocence.

 3.concept

 --> The board of directors is very satisfied this concept.

>> The board of directors is very satisfied with this concept.

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