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<Homework> In winter, I usually go to the ski resort. Because I really enjoy skiing, but I am not good at snowboarding. So one of my friends teached me how to ride a snowboard. Anyway if you want to have a happy time, you have to do some exercise. Normally in winter, many people don't like exercise or activity. So that reason, you will gain your weight. That's why we need some exercise. If we don't do anything, we feel boring. You can also enjoy a spa. At the ski resort, there is a huge spa as well. So if you don't want to skiing or snowboarding, you can go to the spa. The spa like a swimming pool. So many people like it. If you don't like cold weather, you can play at the inside the spa. But you can use outside spa as well. When I skiing from the top of the course. I feel joyful. I'll never forget. And one of my english friend recommanded me a good ski resort. The Canada's snow more soft than the other contury. They are going to Canada every winter for skiing. So I envy them. :P If I earn a lot of money, I will go to the Canada for my winter activity.

Hi there [이름]! I hope you are doing fine. Thank you for doing your homework. Good job on your sentences. Please go over the corrections I have made on some of your sentences and try to remember these corrections as it will definitely help improve your English grammar. Keep up the good work and I hope to see you in class very soon. Take care. ------T. Ritchel-----       In winter, I usually go to the ski resort. >>>CORRECTBecause I really enjoy skiing, but I am not good at snowboarding. >>>CORRECTSo one of my friends teached me how to ride a snowboard. >>>So one of my friends taught me how to ride a snowboard.Anyway if you want to have a happy time, you have to do some exercise. >>>Anyway, if you want to have a happy time, you have to do some exercises.Normally in winter, many people don\'t like exercise or activity. >>>CORRECTSo that reason, you will gain your weight. >>>So for that reason, you will gain weight.That\'s why we need some exercise. >>>CORRECTIf we don\'t do anything, we feel boring. >>>If we don\'t do anything, we feel bored.You can also enjoy a spa. >>>CORRECT  At the ski resort, there is a huge spa as well. >>>CORRECTSo if you don\'t want to skiing or snowboarding, you can go to the spa. >>>So if you don\'t want to go skiing or snowboarding, you can go to the spa.The spa like a swimming pool. >>>The spa is like a swimming pool. So many people like it. >>>CORRECT If you don\'t like cold weather, you can play at the inside the spa. >>>If you don\'t like the cold weather, you can play inside the spa.But you can use outside spa as well. >>>But you can use the outside spa as well. >>You can also use the spa outside.When I skiing from the top of the course. I feel joyful. >>>When I\'m skiing on top of the course, I feel joyful.I\'ll never forget. >>>CORRECTAnd one of my english friend recommanded me a good ski resort. >>>And one of my English friends recommended a good ski resort.The Canada\'s snow more soft than the other contury. >>>Canada\'s snow is softer than the other countries.They are going to Canada every winter for skiing. >>>CORRECTSo I envy them. :P >>>CORRECTIf I earn a lot of money, I will go to the Canada for my winter activity. >>>If I earn a lot of money, I will go to Canada for my winter activity.