Homework

2012-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

A: Hi, Mary. I (didn't see) you at school last Monday. B: Hello, Bob. I (didn't come) on Monday. I wasn't (feeling) well, so I (decided) to go to the doctor. A: Oh! (Was) it serious? B: No, the doctor (examined) me and (told) me I (was having) the flu. He(prescribed) some medicine and (told) me to go home and rest. A: (Didn't) you (stay) home all day last Monday? B: No, only in the morning. I (had) to work in the afternoon, and guess what? A: What? B: When a friend (was driving) me home, he (crashed) his car. He (didn't see) the red light. A: (Was) anyone (get) hurt? B: Thank God, nobody (did) . A: I'm happy to hear that. Well, Mary, I have to rush now. While I (was listening) to your story, I (rememberd) that my wife (askd) me to go to the mechanic to get our car. See you later. Take care. B: You too. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Wow, you did a marvelous job in your homework! I can only see minimal mistakes. I really appreciate you for doing it ^__^ See you tomorrow. ----T. Jane^^---- Here are my corrections for you: A: Hi, Mary. I [didn\'t see] you at school last Monday. >>1. CorrectB: Hello, Bob. I 2. [didn\'t come] on Monday. I wasn\'t 3. [feeling] well, so I 4.[decided] to go to the doctor. >> 2. Correct >> 3. Correct >> 4. CorrectA: Oh! 5.[Was] it serious? >> 5. CorrectB: No, the doctor 6. [examined] me and 7. [told] me I[had] the flu. He 8. (prescribed) some medicine and 9.(told) me to go home and rest. >> 6. Correct >> 7. Correct >> 8. Correct >> 9. CorrectA: 10. (Did) you 11. (stay) home all day last Monday? >> 10. Correct >> 11. CorrectB: No, only in the morning. I 12. (had) to work in the afternoon, and guess what? >> 12. CorrectA: What?B: When a friend 13.(drove) me home, he 14.(crashed) his car. He 15.(didn\'t see) the red light. >> 13. Correct >> 14. Correct >> 15. Correct A: 16.Did anyone 17.(get) hurt? >> 16. Correct >> 17. CorrectB: Thank God, nobody 18.(does) . >> 18. didA: I\'m happy to hear that. Well, Mary, I have to rush now. While I 19.(listened) to your story, I 20.(remembered) that my wife 21.(asked) me to go to the mechanic to get our car. See you later. Take care. >> 19. was listening >> 20. Correct >> 21. CorrectB: You too. Bye

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