Homework
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Doing homework helps students’learning effect and improves their ability of solving problems as well. Most of all, homework is related with what students learned at that time when they was assigned. So, starting to do homework, they will naturally review what they studied. According to the forgetting curve of Ebbinhaus, to go over the contents they learned keeps them to remember for a long time. Through this process, they will be able to increase their learning effect as well as grades at their exam. Secondly, homework develops their ability, how to figure out problems. Students should try to think how to solve it quickly and efficiently when they struggle with it. After finished their work, they are going to get high sense of accomplishment, and confidence, which they can overcome whatever difficult events come out. Of course, students and even teachers have complains about homework but because of the benefits of it, we cannot deny the necessity of homework in our education.
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Hello There!!
Wow, I see that you have improved in your ability to construct longer sentences and in using more vocabulary, though there are still corrections and some things to take note of.
Anyhow thank you for finding time to finish your homework!!
Keep it up
T. Chloe
Doing homework helps students’learning effect and improves their ability of solving problems as well.
>>Doing homework helps students learn as well as improve their ability of solving problems.
Most of all, homework is related with what students learned at that time when they was assigned.
>>Primarily, homework is related with what students learn or study regularly.
So, starting to do homework, they will naturally review what they studied.
>>So, doing homework will naturally help students review what they have just studied.
>>So, doing them will naturally help students review what they have just studied.
According to the forgetting curve of Ebbinhaus, to go over the contents they learned keeps them to remember for a long time.
>>According to the forgetting curve of Ebbinhaus, going over the contents of what was just learned will keep the memory for a longer time.
Through this process, they will be able to increase their learning effect as well as grades at their exam.
>>Through this process, they will be able to increase their knowledge as well as improve their grades in their exams.
Secondly, homework develops their ability, how to figure out problems.
>>Secondly, homework develops their ability to figure out problems.
Students should try to think how to solve it quickly and efficiently when they struggle with it.
>>Students should try to think of how to solve them quickly and efficiently.
After finished their work, they are going to get high sense of accomplishment, and confidence, which they can overcome whatever difficult events come out.
>>After they finish their homework, they are going to get a high sense of accomplishment and confidence that they can overcome whatever difficult events to come.
Of course, students and even teachers have complains about homework but because of the benefits of it, we cannot deny the necessity of homework in our education.
>>Of course, students and even teachers have complains about homeworks but because of its benefits, they cannot deny the necessity of homework in our education.
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