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These days, in Korea, happended many worst news related to sexual assult and murder.Usually, the reason of murder is their situation like hate. Of course I really don't agree, if someone feeling hate another person, you can murder. But, nowadays, some murderer did no reason even didn't know about man. They indiscriminately killed in subway, street, house. That's the problem we don't know who will do attack us.

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you so much once again for doing your homework. Murder is really scary especially if you don\'t know who or what their reasons are. You and your wife have to be careful on your way  home always ,okay?  Anyway, I have made the necessary corrections below. Please find time to check them out. Thank you and have a great day. These days, in Korea, happended many worst news related to sexual assult and murder. >> These days in Korea, many worst news happening are related to sexual assault and murder. Usually, the reason of murder is their situation like hate. >>Usually, the reason for murder is their situation, or their hatred. Of course I really don\'t agree, if someone feeling hate another person, you can murder. >>Of course, I don\'t really agree. If someone is feeling hatred towards another person, you cannot just murder them.But, nowadays, some murderer did no reason even didn\'t know about man. >>But nowadays, some murderers did that for no reason at all, they don\'t even know anything about the person they killed. They indiscriminately killed in subway, street, house. >>They indiscriminately kill on the subway, on the streets, or even in their houses. That\'s the problem we don\'t know who will do attack us. >>CORRECT