Homework

Thanks, Lara, Please fixing my error. (3) Last, Visiting a baseball stadium is one of my hobbies. I cheer for LG twins. When I cheer on my team, I can see very beautiful cheerleaders. Their dancing I suggest you to visit baseball stadium with your family and girl/boy friend. It is kind of cheap price for dating You can sing along fight song and drinking beer and see very nice cheerleaders ^^

Hi [이름]! Your answer makes me smile and then laugh, in a good way. Anyway,thank you for doing your homework. Please go over the corrections I have made, these will help improve your grammar. I will see you in class! Take care. -----T. Lara------   Thanks, Lara, >>>CORRECTPlease fixing my error. >>>Please fix my error. (3) Last, Visiting a baseball stadium is one of my hobbies. >>>CORRECT I cheer for LG twins. >>>I cheer for the LG twins. When I cheer on my team, I can see very beautiful cheerleaders. >>>CORRECT Their dancing >>>They\'re dancing.I suggest you to visit baseball stadium with your family and girl/boy friend. >>>I suggest you visit the baseball stadium with your family and girl/boy friend.  It is kind of cheap price for dating >>>It is kind of a cheap price to pay for dating. You can sing along fight song and drinking beer and see very nice cheerleaders ^^ >>>You can sing along as they sing fight songs and drink beer and look at very nice cheerleaders.